英文故事

可遇日记:
2009年2月26日 晴天
今天是红色天(Dressing Red Day)。所有的人得穿红色。但是没所有的人穿红色的,男孩喜欢穿冰球服。因为冰球服也是红色的。Ebony和Dalliyah没穿红色的。
妈妈很喜欢我穿那身儿衣服!这周我很高兴!

爸爸点评:
可遇回家写作业,写了篇老师在学校讲过的英文故事。这是第一次老师让写一篇完整的故事,以前的作业总是写单词,连句子都很少写。这次感觉很有跳跃性。可遇还没经过什么英文书写训练,所以下面的英文有很多拼写错误。好多词语都是可遇根据发音自己发明的,很有意思。例如fangd(found)就有汉语拼音的影子。
The story of the Greedy Dog
oenc der was a greedy Dog.
He fangd a big stig nre the prke.
the litoe Dog want ot play with his new twy.
the big Dog don't want the lito Dog to play with it.
And he ran awe.
at hes wae he pas be a pangd.
he saw a adr Dog.
the adr Dog had a dig sike to.
but it was olee his sadoe.
the Dog want to take the sike,
but his sik fale.
写完故事后,妈妈帮助可遇校正了一下拼写错误,这回就能看懂啦。
The Story of the Greedy Dog
Once there was a greedy dog.
He found a big stick near the park.
The little dog want to play with his new toy.
The big dog doesn't want the little dog to play with it.
And he ran away.
On his way home, he pass by a pond.
He saw another dog.
The other dog had a big stick too,
but it was only his shadow.
The dog want to take the stick,
but his stick fall.

[本日志由 可遇爸 于 2009-03-27 00:30 AM 编辑]
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